1. Authentic unedited writings from author’s past self at various ages
   or;
   
2. Writings from author’s past, mastered with the way they would write today, maintaining the integrity of the sentiments shared

Hi everyone,

I’ve recently started writing on substack, I’ve started really enjoying it and find it therapeutic but I’d like some feedback how to improve my writing. If anyone has any tips!

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There is so much information out in the cyber world, I can't wait to learn, learn, learn, and then write all about it, so please read what I write. It's a simple ask, people. Gotta' go and learn, learn, learn; be back soon!

Im looking for someone to proofread or give advice to my book.

English is not really my strongest area, and Im mainly looking for help catching grammar, punctuation, awkward sentences, and readability issues. Im not looking for major story changes or developmental editing. Id mainly appreciate someone pointing out things that sound unnatural or grammatically incorrect, as ive already written down alot of materials for my book.

This is the opening of a progression fantasy novel I'm currently working on. If you enjoy the genre and are willing to take a look, I'd really appreciate it.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ksR7Wm4pd2FJrbO3mKgUDfHOf9v5vVi8/view?usp=drivesdk