Hi! I don't speak a word of French but I'm writing a song for my boyfriend and chose to make one verse entirely in French since he grew up speaking the language.
However I've hit a wall since google translate can only get me so far lol
If you're a genuine French speaker please let me know what you think, if the lines make sense, what the lines actually read as XD and what phrases best suit what I'm trying to go for XD Thanks! <3 all comments of help and correction are welcome!
He's the one I adore, how you say me amore,
well actually it's more like je taime celui qui mi vraiment sauve la vie,
je suis rassasie.
etputain, quelcoeur et quel cerveau magnifiques,
mais aussi quel physique!
musclé, bien bâti, épais, trapu, solide, luisant, un beau garçon,
je n'ai plus faim,
(what line pairs best with 'I am not hungry anymore' to make a kind of sexual call back from the 'I am satisfied/full' line at the beginning, I want one closest to the meaning of 'I am full of dat diick')
je suis plein a craquer et pourtant j'en veux toujours plus
or
je suis rempli de toi jusqu'à a en éclater, mais j'en veux toujours plus
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